you draw and animate extremely well, but this lacks of interest
i don't see whats so interesting to see a baby look at a crane and be disappointed when it turns away
there is no moral in your "story" , but if there is, im stumped.
You must have missed the part with Pedobear?
you're on a REALLY bad start
this isnt near funny, you could just of done this with regular babys and would of probably been better. you may of created a site for nothing...for now, you may need to come up woth funnier jokes, TAKE YOUR TIME, never rush, or else this happens, if you didnt rush on this that you should still take more time to do it
it's good but.....
this is good but it ,ight be lacking of.....pencilmation u know?
this doesn't need the name of pencilmation anymore because the pencil does no action.......i know that u couldnt of done anything about this because u didnt write the screenplay but BE CAREFUL ur ratings are going down
Might i make a WILD guess
YOU WERE STONED MAAAAAAN
but i love it
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AH kid paddle!
ILOVE KID PADDLE, good job, immitating this. but this is kinda stolen
this was great, i like these kinds of animation, you're pretty damn good,
thank you, i truly enjoyed it
a horrible use for my song
this is a disgrace
too short and crappy
i knew right when i saw the title
i knew it was gonna be that joke haha
that was cool
i wanna watch it again
i have to say it's not bad
however this does NOT deserve a 5 sorry
-camera movements are to clippy use more frames per second -recommentdation: 30 fps
-animate the scenes in order next time
-"dam" is spelled "damn"
-get better voice actors and make the sound better quality
ill show you how to do that
-work on the intro it's too slow and the title
-hair movement to fast and repetitive, same for curtains
-put more time into this
have nice animating
thanks for the pointers, i see 30 fps is quite the challenge. i believe i'll move my 12 fps to 24 fps for ep2. then i'll try targeting 30fps for ep3.
Thank you so much for ur honesty.
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