Good style
you draw and animate extremely well, but this lacks of interest
i don't see whats so interesting to see a baby look at a crane and be disappointed when it turns away
there is no moral in your "story" , but if there is, im stumped.
Good style
you draw and animate extremely well, but this lacks of interest
i don't see whats so interesting to see a baby look at a crane and be disappointed when it turns away
there is no moral in your "story" , but if there is, im stumped.
You must have missed the part with Pedobear?
you're on a REALLY bad start
this isnt near funny, you could just of done this with regular babys and would of probably been better. you may of created a site for nothing...for now, you may need to come up woth funnier jokes, TAKE YOUR TIME, never rush, or else this happens, if you didnt rush on this that you should still take more time to do it
nerd.
i have to say it's not bad
however this does NOT deserve a 5 sorry
tips:
-camera movements are to clippy use more frames per second -recommentdation: 30 fps
-animate the scenes in order next time
-"dam" is spelled "damn"
-get better voice actors and make the sound better quality
ill show you how to do that
-work on the intro it's too slow and the title
-hair movement to fast and repetitive, same for curtains
-put more time into this
that's it
have nice animating
chereoo!!
thanks for the pointers, i see 30 fps is quite the challenge. i believe i'll move my 12 fps to 24 fps for ep2. then i'll try targeting 30fps for ep3.
Thank you so much for ur honesty.
im not gonna fall for that a second time
ive seen this kinda stuff befor its only actionscript but the thought is good
Well obviously. The people who didn't pick up on that and aren't NG regs are just thick as shit.
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaah you scared the ...crap out of meee dude what kind of dreams do you have to make stuff like that
i almost died of a heart attack and i was distracted
duuude
were yur speakers on full blast? :U
hmmm
is wasnt bad ,the fight needs a little more DEVALOPMENT(to lazy to know how its spelled correctly)
look at how avlin earthworm did it
youll see
i know how he does it. this is my second try
but... the third one will be longer and more like power star hopefully, doing alvin would be to DBZ'ish =/
you guys are just jealous
you guys make fun of sprite a day because you guys are so stupid and immature
you guys are just jealous
jealous of tweened picures yes, its a fucking difficult concept
frame by frame
frame by frame is not a good way to animate
i can see the u didnt spend much time on this
if you want ill teach you motion tween its rather simple
PS::good luck with your PC
i know how to animate im just extremely lazy but thanks for the offer
and my computer is fixed now~
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